<div>작문을 해야 하는데....</div> <div>영어를 잘 몰라서요. 여기저기 찾고 번역기도 돌려서 작문을 했는데요...</div> <div>아무래도 어색한 부분도 있고, 글이 자연스러운거 같지 않아서요.</div> <div>잘못된 부분 수정하고 글좀 자연스럽게 수정좀 부탁드릴께요.ㅠㅠ</div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;"></span> </div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;"></span> </div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">나는 일본을 여행하고 싶다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">그래서 내년 여름 방학 때 일본을 여행할 예정이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">여행은 나의 고등학교 친구와 할 것이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">그는 지금 군대에 있지만 내년에 제대 할 것이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">내가 일본을 여행하고 첫 번째 이유는 한국이랑 가까워서 여행하는데 편리하다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">둘째 일본의 문화가 흥미롭다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">셋째 비용이 저렴하기 때문이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">일본을 가는 방법은 제주도에서 비행기를 타고 부산에 간다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">부산에서 친구를 만난다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">그리고 부산에서 배를 타고 오사카로 향한다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">배를 타고 일본을 가는 것이 비행기를 타고 가는 것보다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">시간은 오래 걸린다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">하지만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">10</span><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">만원 이상 저렴하다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div>   <p></p></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">일본에 가서 첫 번째로 오사카성을 갈 것이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">. </span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">이곳은 거대 하고 일본의 역사를 볼 수 있다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">다음으로는 도톰보리를 갈 것이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">토톰보리는 쇼핑을 많이 할 수 있고 길거리 음식들이 많다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">그리고 교토도 갈 것이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">교토로 가서 아름다운 대나무 숲을 갈 것이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">그리고 교토에서 일본의 전통음식을 먹을 것 이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">그리고 고베도 갈 것이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">고베에 마을에 가서 그들이 사는 모습을 볼 것이다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">.</span></div> <div><span style="font-family:'굴림';font-size:9pt;">그리고 밤에는 아름 다운 야경을 볼 것이다.</span></div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;"> </span><div> </div> <hr><div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;"></span> </div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">I want to travel to Japan.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">So will travel to Japan during summer vacation next year.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">With friends was my high school.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">He is in the Army, but going to get discharged next year.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">he first reason why I want to go in Japan Japan is close to Korea it is convenient to go to Japan.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">Second, Japanese culture is interesting.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">Third is to cost less.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">Go to Busan by plane in The way to go to Japan form Jeju Island.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">I met a friend in Busan. And in Busan, bound for Osaka by ship.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">An airplane to go to Japan by boat ride than to go. than</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">Time is long. But cheaper than 10 million won.</span></div> <div>   <p></p></div> <div>   <p></p></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">The first going to Osaka to go to Japan. </span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">This is big and I can see the history of Japan.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">Next, will go to the dotombori</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">There are lots of street foods to the shopping done a lot of barley totom.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">And, I will go to Kyoto.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">Beautiful bamboo forest will go to go to Kyoto.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">And in Kyoto, Japan's traditional foods to eat.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">And Kobe will go too.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">Go and see the way they live in a village in Kobe.</span></div> <div><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:9pt;">And will see a beautiful view of down at night.</span></div> <div>   <p></p></div> <div style="background:rgb(255,255,255);">   <p></p></div> <div><br><br> </div> <div> </div>