<div><br></div> <div><br></div> <div><br></div> <div><br></div> <div>1. 핵 드립 반박은 논지에서 벗어나는 이야기이기에 뺏습니다.</div> <div>2. 각주 제외, 글자 수는 공백 초함 2,500자 이하 제한 했습니다.</div> <div>3. 청원은 개정과 개정을 거쳐서 토요일 2시에 올릴 예정입니다.<span style="font-size:9pt;"> 제가 만일 선배분들처럼 분노의 질주처럼 가버려도 토요일 2시에 청원 개시 해주시 바랍니다.</span></div> <div><br></div> <div><br></div> <div>부탁 드리는 피드백</div> <div>1. 가독성에 대한 향상</div> <div>2. 논리 전개가 술술 되는 가에 대한 평가</div> <div>3. 힘있는 문맥 전개를 위한 조언</div> <div>4. 1~3번을 만족하면서 줄임말과 반말을 쓰지않고도 글자 수를 좀 더 줄일 수 있는 방법에 대하여</div> <div><br></div> <div><br></div> <div>-------------------------------------------</div> <div><br></div> <div> <p><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">저 출산과 복무 기간 단축으로 발생한 관심병사로 인한 전투력 손실은 심각합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">. </span></p> <p><span lang="en-us"> </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">근래 현역 판정율이 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">80~91%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">를 달성 하여 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">158.6cm, 42kg</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">인 허약자나 허리디스크환자</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">기흉</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">심부전 환자 등 신체적 결함은 물론</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">정신적 결함이 있는 자원까지 들어오고 있습니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">국방부가 국회에 제출한 자료에 따르면</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">병사 중 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">10%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">가량이 관심 병사입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">중대의 병 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">100</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명가량 중 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">10</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명이 관심 병사라는 끔찍한 이야기입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">관심병사가 아니더라도 허약자 및 환자들은 전시 임무 수행이 거의 불가능합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">.</span></p> <p>   </p> <p></p> <p><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">군 감축에도 불구하고 관심병사 문제는 심각해집니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">.</span><span lang="en-us"> </span></p> <p><span lang="en-us"> </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">국방개혁은 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">6</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">백조원대 예산으로 첨단화</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">정예화 하고 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">EBO, NCW </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">등 신 교리를 적용</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 05</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">년 기준</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 68</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">(</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">육군 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">55</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">)</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">에서 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">22</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">년까지 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">50</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">(</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">육군 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">37</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">)</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">까지 감축하는 최대의 개혁입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">군 구조도 간부 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">15%, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">병 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">85%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">에서 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">40%, 60%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">으로 바뀌어 병은 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">30</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만까지 줍니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. 22</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">년부터 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">年 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">필요 자원은 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">18</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개월 복무 시 병 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">20</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">민간인 남성 중 간부 지원자 약 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">1</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">전문연구요원 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">2,500</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">산업기능요원 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">6,500</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">공중보건의</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">공중방역수의사가 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">5,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">총 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">22</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">4,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">이에 반해</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 03</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">년부터 평균 출생남아 수는 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">23</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">4,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">특히 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">22</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">년은 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">22</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">5,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명뿐입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">평균 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">96%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">가 현역 판정이죠</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">입대유예를 감안하면 보다 많은 현역 판정을 내려야합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">판정율이 더 오르면 관심 병사의 비율도 늘어납니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">.</span></p> <p>   </p> <p></p> <p><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">문제해결법은</span><span lang="en-us"> </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">모병제</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">대규모 감축</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">양성 징병제</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">복무기간 연장 등이 있습니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">.</span></p> <p>   </p> <p></p> <p><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">모병제</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">모병제는 불가 합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">.</span><span lang="en-us"> </span></p> <p><span lang="en-us"> </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">첫째</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">필요 병력이 안모입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">연구</span> <img alt="" src=""><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">에 따르면</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">모병제로 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">20</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만을 유지하기 위해</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">男 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">6.6%, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">女 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">0.7%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">가 지원해야 하며</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 30</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만을 유지하기 위해</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">男 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">9.6%, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">女 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">1.1%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">의 지원이 필요합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. (</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">군인의 위상이 높은 미국도 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">男 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">5.4% </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">.) </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">高</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">연봉 에도 위상은 안 높아집니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">특수 용접공은 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">20</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">대 후반이면 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">高</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">연봉을 받고 안정적이지만</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">청년들은 사무직에 몰려듭니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">둘째</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 20</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만으로 국토를 못 지킵니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. 20</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만을 유지 시 육군은 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">10</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만에 전투여단 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">12</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개 입니다</span> <img alt="" src=""><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. 6</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">백조원대 예산을 투입하는 국방 개혁 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">2020 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">목표가 육군 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">37</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 55</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개 현역전투여단</span> <img alt="" src=""><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">서울이 휴전선에서 너무 가까워서 기동방어로 병력을 아낄 수 있는 전술적 이점을 얻지 못해</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">모든 길목을 막기 때문입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. 12</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개의 전투여단으로 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">1</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개 여단은 동남부</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 1</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개 여단은 서남부</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 1</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개 여단은 김포반도</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 1</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개 여단은 수도권에 배치해야만하고 전방 지역은 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">8</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개 여단만 배치 가능합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">전방 지역은 현 국방개혁 이후에도 첨단화된 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">5</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개 군단</span> <img alt="" src=""><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">으로 지키는 곳입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">반드시 사수 해야 하는 종심이 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">40km</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">에 불과한데 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">8</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개 여단으로 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">100</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만에 대적하는 건 미국도 못하는 일입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">.</span></p> <p>   </p> <p></p> <p><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">대규모 추가 감축</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">대규모 추가 감축은 불가 합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">. </span></p> <p><span lang="en-us"> </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">다른 연구</span> <img alt="" src=""><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">에 따르면</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">대북 조기 점령 능력을 포기</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">휴전선 방어에 만족하면</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">병력을 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">30~40</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만까지 감축이 가능합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">병은 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">10~20</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. 18</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개월 복무 시</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">평균 남아 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">23</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">4,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명 중 상위 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">40~60%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">의 우수한 남성만 징병해도 충분 합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">모병제와 달리</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 30</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">여개의 전투여단을 운용 할 수 있어서 효율적인 방어가 가능 합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">하지만</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">어떤 정권도 대북 조기 점령 능력을 포기하지 않고 강화했습니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">첫째</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">대북 조기 점령 능력이 없다면</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">대북 전쟁 억제력 중 한 축이 사라져서 적에게 과감한 도발을 허용 할 수 있습니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">둘째</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">북한에 급변사태가 발생</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">제 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">3</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">세력이 개입해도 우리는 개입 할 수 없습니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">셋째</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">자주국방을 위해 문재인 정부가 추진하는 독자적 평양 함락 작전계획에 반대되는 선택입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">.</span><span lang="en-us" style="font-weight:bold;"> </span><span lang="en-us"> </span><span lang="en-us" style="font-weight:bold;"> </span></p> <p>   </p> <p></p> <p><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">양성 징병제</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">관심병사보다 건강한 여성이 뛰어납니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">.</span><span lang="en-us"> </span></p> <p><span lang="en-us"> </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">여군이 가장 많은 이스라엘</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">(</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">전군 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">中 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">33%)</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">도 여성 절반은 면제지만 덕분에 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">25%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">나 되는 남성들이 면제를 받습니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">年 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">필요 병역 자원은 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">22</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">4,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">年 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">평균 출생 남아 중 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">75%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">는 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">17</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">5,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">나머지 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">4</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">9,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명은 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">年 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">평균 출생 여아 중 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">22%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">의 여성들이 맡아주시면 됩니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">남성은 상위 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">75%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">까지 군 복무를 하고 상위 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">75%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">의 여성은 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">18</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개월의 군 복무</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">(20%)</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">와 기초 군사훈련 포함 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">24</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">개월 사회복무</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">(50%) </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">中 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">택하게 하는 겁니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">보완책으로 군필자는 공공분야 뿐만 아니라 공공자금이 들어간 사기업 입사 시 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">5~10%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">가량의 군 가산점을 준다면 유인 요인이 될 것입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">즉</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">추가로 더 징병하는 것이 아니라 부적합 남성을 대체하는 것입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">기행부대</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">지원부대 중 일부중대를 여군 간부</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">병 위주의 중대로 바꾸면</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;"></span><span lang="en-us"> </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">추가비용이 많이들지 않습니다.</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">.</span></p> <p>   </p> <p></p> <p><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">복무기간 연장</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">, 24</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-weight:bold;">개월 복무 시 여성 징병 없이 부적합자 제외가 가능합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-weight:bold;">.</span></p> <p><span lang="en-us"> </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">총 병사 수는 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">30</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만 일 때</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, 2</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">년 복무 시 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;">年 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">필요한 신병 수는 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">15</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">대체복무자까지 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">17</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">4,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">이는 연 평균 남아 수 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">23</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">4,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">명 중 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">75%</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">가량입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">전투력 향상만 생각한다면</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">최고의 솔루션입니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">. </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">양성 징병제가 불가 하다면</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">결국</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">우리는 남성 독박 징병을 택해야 합니다</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;">.</span></p> <p>   </p> <p></p> <p><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';">각주</span></p> <p><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">(1) KIDA </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">주간 국방논단 제 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">1657</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">호</span></p> <p><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">(2) </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">모병제 국가 비교</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">미 육군 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">46</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">만</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">-</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">전투여단 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">31</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">프랑스 육군 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">7</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">만 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">– </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">7</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개 전투 여단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">독일 육군 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">5</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">만 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">6,000</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">명 </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">– </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">6</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개 전투여단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">한국 육군이 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">10</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">만 일 시 보유 가능 부대 수</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">전투 여단 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">12</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">포병 여단 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">3</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">항공 여단 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">3</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">군수지원여단 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">3</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">그 외 기술행정부대</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">병과 학교 등 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">( </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">특수부대 여단는 계산 치 않음</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">)</span></p> <p><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">(3) </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">최근 국방개혁안 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">4</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개 전방군단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">(12</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개 보병사단 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">+ 10</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개 기갑여단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">), </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">수도 군단 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">( </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">현 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">17</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">보병 사단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">), </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">제 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">7</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">기동군단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">(6</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개 기갑여단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">) 13</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개 보병 사단 예하 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">39</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개 보병여단 및 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">16</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개 기갑여단 합 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">55</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">개 전투여단 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">(</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">특전사 제외</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">)</span></p> <p><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">(4) 1</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">군단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, 5</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">군단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, 2</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">군단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, 3</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">군단</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">, </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">제</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">7</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">기동군단 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">(</span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">수도 군단은 수도권 및 김포반도 방어</span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">)</span></p> <p><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">(5) </span><span style="font-family:'함초롬바탕';font-size:8pt;">참여연대 평화군축센터 연구 </span><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">(</span><a target="_blank" href="http://www.peoplepower21.org/Politics/1407330" target="_blank"><u><span lang="en-us" style="font-family:sans-serif;letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:7pt;color:#0000ff;">http://www.peoplepower21.org/Politics/1407330</span></u></a><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;">)</span></p> <p><span lang="en-us" style="letter-spacing:0pt;font-size:8pt;"></span></p></div>