<font size="3"> </font> <div class="a" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt'><span style="mso-tab-count: 1">공대생의 짧은 영어지식으로 쓰기에 너무 어렵네요....</span></span></div> <div class="a" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt'><span style="mso-tab-count: 1">대충 써놨는데 어색하거나 한 부분 좀 알려주세요... 마지막 문장은 제가 잘 못쓰겠어서ㅜㅜ 부탁드립니다</span></span></div> <div class="a" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt'><span style="mso-tab-count: 1"></span></span> </div> <div class="a" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt'><span style="mso-tab-count: 1"> </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'>We spend a lot of money for school tuition and daily expense. It is almost impossible to earn money alone for living in Korea. That's the reason why a number of university students economically and mentally rely on their parents too much. In Choongbook-Ilbo, it says "Albamon, which is specialized company in searching part time jobs, carried out a survey targeting 839 university students(men 467, women 372) about their independence. 12.3%(men 13.9%, women 10.2%) replied that they highly depend on their parents, 52.6%(men 49%, women 57%) said they depend on their parents to a certain extent, and only 35.1% of them replied that they are independent from their parents."(1)</span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt'> </span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'>Korean university students who depend on their parents financially and mentally tend to live by their parents' will, not on theirs. According to Lee, Kyungmin's master's thesis targeting university students, the lower students' psychological independence level from their parents is, the more they are likely to have difficulty in deciding their future direction like choosing their career. It shows the correlation between psychological independence level from parents and future direction pendency.(2)</span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt'></span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'>It is very important to live their life by their will. If they live their life by their parents’ will, they would be unhappy. University students are adults, adults are determine their own lives, and to be responsible. If they live by their parents' will and they became unhappy, they blame their parents.</span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt'></span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'>Also their parents are become incapable to supporting them financially and mentally, they should be in panic. They don't know how to earn money, how to make a big decision, just they are in confusion.</span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt'><o:p></o:p></span></div><font size="3"> </font> <div class="a" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt; text-indent: 40pt"><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'>One of possible solution is get a part-time job within vacation or year off and earn money to independent. Korean university students are familiar money and house that their parents offer. By working part-time job, they are qualified to independent financially, and they have sense of independence too.</span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt'><o:p></o:p></span></div><font size="3"> </font> <div class="a" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt; text-indent: 40pt"><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'>Another solution is finding their ego themselves. There are many people who find their ego by meditation or voluntary work. </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>부모의</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>기대에서</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>벗어나</span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'>, </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>진정</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>자기가</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>하고</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>싶은</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>것을</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>찾는다면</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>부모로부터</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>정신적으로</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>완벽하게</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>독립할</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>수</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>있을</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>것이다</span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'>. </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>완벽한</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>자아를</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>확립하는</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>순간</span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'>, </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>부모님의</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>의견이</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>아닌</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>자아실현이</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>나의</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>의사결정에</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>가장</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>큰</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>영향을</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>미칠</span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'> </span><span style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "함초롬바탕","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: 굴림; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"'>것이다</span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; font-family: "Times New Roman","serif"; font-size: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 함초롬바탕'>. </span><span lang="EN-US" style='line-height: 160%; 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