<div>여기가 맞는 게시판인지 잘 모르겠습니다만 염치불구하고 물어보겠습니다 ㅠ</div> <div><br></div>돈모아서 워홀 갈라고 영어작문 시작한지 몇 일 안됬거든요 그런데 고등학교 졸업하고 영어 한 번도 손에 댄적없지만 <div>제 글 읽는 한국 사람들이 번역기 돌린거 같다. </div> <div>한국 사람이 봤을 때는 단어만 보면 무슨 말 인지는 아니까<span style="font-size:9pt;line-height:1.5;">그렇게 유추해서 읽는다. </span></div> <div>이런 반응만 보이니까 전 왜 그런지 모르겠고 결과만 그렇다고 하니까 </div> <div>미쳐버리겠어요 @_@.</div> <div><br></div> <div>이거 한 번 봐주시고 왜 그런지 알려주시면 안될까요? 어떻게 고쳐야할지 알려주시면 복 받으실거에요 ㅠ.</div> <p class="바탕글">i thought that is about illegal immigrant who have problem of potential possible crimes.</p> <p class="바탕글">there are two sight of this problem in Korea.</p> <p class="바탕글"> </p> <p class="바탕글"> </p> <p class="바탕글">first, they are social weakness so we protect them or they are protect because they are social weakness </p> <p class="바탕글">two, all of illegal immigrants must be reported </p> <p class="바탕글">but i don't watch this case use these two of sight, just watch it is.</p> <p class="바탕글"> </p> <p class="바탕글"> </p> <p class="바탕글">i don't know exactly how to deal with crime(it's special or not) that illegal immigrant do.</p> <p class="바탕글">actually (they can choice one that is two of option).</p> <p class="바탕글"></p> <p class="바탕글"> </p> <p class="바탕글">one. you be punished as Korea of rules for what you do.</p> <p class="바탕글">two. you will be reported soon your nation and you don't be punished . </p> <p class="바탕글"> </p> <p class="바탕글"></p> <p class="바탕글">first choice does not matter to Korean but two is serious matter.</p> <p class="바탕글"> </p> <p class="바탕글"> if you illegal immigrant how would you do.</p> <p class="바탕글">illegal immigrant behavior can be separated as illegal immigrants mind so someone avoid arrest , someone will hide he's body and trace and he will live keeping silence</p> <p class="바탕글">or anyway if they get caught by police and then does not accuse of there crime ,just report, they do not hesitate whatever they do in Korea. </p> <p class="바탕글"></p> <p class="바탕글"> i feel these problem is connected complex many other thing but i feel if Korea save there's safe will sacrifice something is</p> <div><span style="font-size:9pt;line-height:1.5;">Live in free and inclusive societies or safe and livable society</span> </div>
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