<span style="color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">제가 영어를 진짜 못하는데</span> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">영어 수행평가가 작문이여서요</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">제가 틀린 문법이나 단어 혹은 더 잘어울리는 문법이나 단어가 있다면 고쳐주세요</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><br style="margin:0px;padding:0px;"></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><br style="margin:0px;padding:0px;"></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">오늘은 제가 우리는 왜 영어 공부를 해야하는지에 대해 말씀드리겠습니다</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">Today</span>, I <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">will</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">talk</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">about</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">why</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">we</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">should</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">study</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">English</span></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">먼저 당신이 영어가 필요할때 사용할수 있습니다.</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">First</span>, <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">you</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">can</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">use</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">English</span>, <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">when</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">you</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">need</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">it</span></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">예를 들어, 당신이 여행중이거나, 해외에서 공부중일때</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">Example</span>, <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">When</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">you</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">traveling</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">or</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">when</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">you</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">studying</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">in</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">abroad</span></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">두번째로, 당신은 외국인 친구를 만들 수 있습니다.</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">Secondly</span>, <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">you</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">can</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">make</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">foreign</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">friends</span></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">그리고 외국인 친구를 만듦으로써 새로운 문화와 다양한 정보를 배울 수 있습니다.</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">By</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">making</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">foreign</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">friends</span>, <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">you</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">can</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">learn</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">another</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">cultures</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">and</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">various</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">information</span></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">마지막으로 당신이 진정으로 공부하고싶을때, 좀더 나은 환경인 해외에서 공부할 수 있습니다. 동의하시나요?</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">Finally</span>, <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">if</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">you</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">want</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">study</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">something</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">seriously</span>, <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">you</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">can</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">study</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">in</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">better</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">environment</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">from</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">abroad</span></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">Do</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">you</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">agree</span>?</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">이외에도 우리가 공부해야할 이유는 많겠지만 저는 이렇게 3가지 이유를 예시로 들었습니다.</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">There</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">is</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">so</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">many</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">reason</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">that</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">why</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">we</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">should</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">study</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">English</span>, <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">But</span> I <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">just</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">cite</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">three</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">example</span></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">그렇지만 거기엔 특별한 이유가 없습니다, 단지 제가 공부하는 이유이기 때문이죠, 이게 답니다. 더 없어요</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">But</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">there</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">is</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">no</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">special</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">motive</span>.</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">It</span>'s <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">all</span>. <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">no</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">more</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">reason</span></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">어쨌든 어려분 우리 영어 공부 합시다,</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">Anyway</span>, <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">guys</span>, <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">let</span>'s <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">study</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">English</span></div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;">들어주셔서 감사합니다.</div> <div style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:#404040;font-family:gulim, sans-serif;font-size:13px;line-height:22.1px;"><span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">Thank</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">you</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">for</span> <span class="word_dic en" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;float:none;display:inline;border:0px;background:none;">listenning</span></div>