<div>제가 직접 써보았는데요..</div> <div>확실히 기본이 안되있다보니 ㅠㅠ 영작이 너무 서투른거 같습니다..</div> <div>부족한 부분을 지적 해주시면 정말 감사하겠습니다..</div> <div> </div> <div>Nice to meet you sir.<br />First I want to explain that why I desire entrance into Changwon polytechnic.<br />I'm working at textile factory.<br />From direct experiences in the field, I felt many things.<br />Low salary,hard working it really makes me dissapointed.<br />So I decided to find another job.<br />I was wonder that how can I find a better job?<br />What should I do?<br />The answer was improve the value of on my own.<br />What can i do to improve my value?<br />After Struggling, I think that I have to go college to improve my value. <br />So I decide entrance into Changwon polytech.<br />That's it thank you.<br /></div>
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